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Sep. 5th, 2008 @ 07:05 pm Fic: Vizzini's Rule (47/105)
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Title: Vizzini's Rule, Chapter 47

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: Um...nope

Spoilers: Season One thru Random Shoes (1x09) and Season Two for the episode Adrift (2x11)

Disclaimer: Torchwood and all its wonderfulness belong to Russell T. Davies and the Mighty Beeb. Just goofin' around!

Summary: In which we find out about the mysterious "FH"...

Notes: Thanks to my lovely, wonderful, awesome and oh-so-much-fun-to-sit-in-line-with beta [info]thrace_adams, I am able to bring you the next chapter tonight. Thanks hun!!  :D   Hope ya'll enjoy!

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Vizzini's Rule: Chapter Forty-Seven

Previously on Vizzini’s Rule:
“What’s wrong with that rift spike, Jack, and why wouldn’t you just tell Tosh?”

Jack regarded him for a moment. “Damn, you’re right.”

“About what?”

“You can always tell when I’m lying.”


Ianto laughed quietly. “I told you. Now what’s going on, Jack?”

Jack sighed. He looked at the printout and then back at Ianto and seemed to come to some kind of decision. “Have a seat,” he said as he stood up and crossed the room to the cabinets on the wall. He unlocked one, pulled out the secure-phone and returned to his desk.

Noting the sadness that was back in Jack’s eyes, Ianto asked, “Jack, does this have something to do with FH? Who is it?”

Jack smiled. “You are way too smart for your own good, Ianto. Yes, this has to do with FH. And this rift spike. And why I was lying to Tosh. I… I need to talk to someone about this. It’s unpleasant, in fact it’s downright horrifying. It’s also Torchwood’s biggest secret, so I need you to swear that you won’t tell the others. Okay?”

“I promise,” Ianto said solemnly.

Jack ran a hand through his hair. “Where to start?” He looked at Ianto for a moment and then rifled through one of his lower drawers. He pulled out a folder with a single piece of paper in it – another rift monitor report from six weeks before. He set it on his desk so it was facing Ianto. Using a pen, he pointed to a spot on the report where the spike went below the “safe” line that ran along the bottom of the graph. “Do you see this? It’s called a negative rift spike.”

Ianto nodded. This was all part of Jack’s ‘Welcome to Torchwood: This is the Rift, Don’t Mess With It’ speech.

“I told you it’s just residual energy. That was a lie.”

“So what is it?”

“Well, you know how rift spikes can leave behind objects, aliens, whatever? Well, negative spikes take things away.”

“Things?” Ianto asked, dreading clarification.

“Things – objects, cars, animals… people.”

Ianto swallowed hard. “And this report?” he asked, tapping the one Tosh had just delivered.

Jack slid it closer to Ianto. “If you look here,” he said, pointing with his pen again, “can you see anything different about this spike?”

Ianto studied the paper, lifting it up to the light, looking for anything out of the ordinary. He sighed in defeat. “I can’t. It looks like a normal rift spike to me,” he said as he set the paper back down. But even as he spoke, something caught his eye. “Wait a minute… are those little feathery edges just from the printer being dirty?”

Jack looked proud. “No. That’s a signature. That’s what I look for every day when I look at these reports.”

“But what does it mean?” Ianto asked in confusion.

“Very simply, it means that whatever came through the rift during this spike, has already been through it once before. It means that something or someone has been returned.”

“They can come back?”

“Sometimes.”

“Alive?”

“Sometimes, although I wonder if it’s a miracle or a curse,” Jack said in a voice that made Ianto’s heart ache.

“What… what’s wrong with them?”

“A million different things. It’s… it’s the most godawful part of this job, Ianto. When I took over Torchwood, we had already found two survivors, merely by chance. We didn’t know what was wrong with them when we found them. Hell, one of them? We weren’t even sure he was human. Alex locked them in the vaults next to the weevils. He kept them alive, but that was about it. I tried to talk to them whenever I could, find out what had happened to them. I finally put it together from things they’d said, planets, galaxies they could name that no human in the 21st Century should have any knowledge of. Then I started to keep an eye on the rift. I went through the archives of reports and finally put two and two together.”

Jack took a drink of his coffee and rubbed his hands over his face before he continued.

“When Alex… died and I took over, the first thing I did was to create a place for Alice and Jules and the others that would come, somewhere they could live, so they could have some semblance of a life. It’s on Flat Holm Island.”

“FH,” Ianto said.

“Yes. There’s a medical facility there now, with staff who believe their patients were rescued from illegal medical testing and experiments gone wrong. They don’t pay any attention when the victims babble about aliens and time travel. They just care for them, take them out to watch the birds, make sure they eat.”

“God Jack that’s…”

“Awful, I know. I never wanted to burden anyone with this, but I… I can’t do it alone anymore. I know it’s weak, but I just need someone to talk to.” Jack sighed. “I think I’m starting to understand how Suzie felt.”

Ianto swallowed the lump in his throat. Jack needed someone to confide in and he chose me. Not Gwen or Tosh or… well, no one in their right mind would confide in Owen, but he chose me. He reached for the report with the strange rift spike again, looking down at it as he said, “It’s not weak to admit you need help with something, Jack. It’s smart. What I don’t understand is why you or Torchwood, whoever decided, need to keep it a secret.”

“We’re here to monitor the rift, to keep people safe and there’s nothing we can do to stop this from happening. I’ve had Tosh working on a rift predictor program since they day she arrived, but there is just no way to know when or where these negative spikes will hit.”

“I understand all that, but why keep it secret at Torchwood? Surely the fact that we’re helping those who return is the important part.”

“It’s just… We see too much of the horror in the world as it is. This job, the things we deal with every day, the things we know are out there, are coming. You can see too much of that. It can make it impossible to go on.”

“I still don’t understand. What you’re doing here is a good thing–”

Jack interrupted. “It is a good thing, but it can’t erase what happened to these people. Trust me, Ianto, I’ve seen what happens when this job gets to you,” Jack said with a shudder.

“You’re talking about Suzie again, aren’t you?” Ianto asked.

“No,” Jack said. “Suzie was… well, Suzie was different. No, I’m talking about Alex. He… he saw something, I never knew what, but whatever it was, it drove him mad. He said we weren’t ready. That something was coming, everything was going to change and that we weren’t ready. He… he killed the entire team and then he shot himself right in front of me.”

Jack’s eyes clouded over, lost in the painful memories of the past. Ianto was silent, not wanting to intrude. So that’s what happened, he thought. If Alex had shot Jack that night as well… Ianto’s throat closed up and he swallowed hard. He reached across the desk to place his hand over Jack’s.

At the touch, Jack jerked, startled by the contact. He looked down at Ianto’s hand and turned his over to return the reassuring grip. They sat like that for a moment until Ianto glanced down and the rift activity report caught his eye.

“Jack, how long since this report came through?”

Jack glanced down at his watch. “Almost twenty minutes now.”

Ianto jumped to his feet. “We have to get out there. See who came back.”

“Ianto, wait a minute. We don’t even know for sure it was a person. I have to wait for the SUV to be ready to drive again.”

“That’s stupid,” Ianto said bluntly.

Jack looked surprised. “What?”

“We don’t need the SUV, we can just take my car. Jack, please! I can’t stand the thought that someone might be out there, hurt and… and lost and–”

“Whoa, Ianto, you’re not coming with me. I meant it, I don’t want the team involved with Flat Holm and that goes for you too.”

“You can’t be serious,” Ianto said.

“I’m completely serious. I don’t want you to see this, Ianto, I just needed someone to talk to,” Jack said, his voice fading a bit at the end as if he realized how lame his excuse sounded.

“Then you should have chosen someone else because if you think I can sit idly by when I could be helping, then you don’t know me at all,” Ianto said with a touch of anger and sadness in his tone.

Jack just looked at Ianto for almost a full minute, then his face softened. He stood up and walked from behind his desk to stand in front of Ianto. He reached up to cup his face and placed a soft kiss on his lips. “I do know you, Ianto. Let’s go.” Jack grabbed his coat and started to walk out the door. He turned to see Ianto still standing motionless by his desk. “You coming?” he asked.

Ianto nodded slowly. “Just like that?” he asked, joining Jack at the door.

“Just like that,” Jack agreed. “I’ve learned not to argue with you about this sort of thing. Plus,” Jack paused for a second. “I think maybe I told you because I knew wouldn’t give up on it.”

“I can handle this, Jack. I’m stronger than you think,” Ianto said as they stepped into the elevator.

“Ianto,” Jack said, pulling him into his arms. “You are the strongest person I know. Someday, I’d really love to stop being the guy who has to keep finding out just how strong. I meant what I said this morning. I only want you to be happy.”

“Helping you makes me happy,” Ianto mumbled into Jack’s shoulder.

“What did I do to deserve you?” Jack wondered.

Ianto just smiled and kissed him as the elevator slowed to a stop.

“Come on, Captain. Work to do.”

TBC in Chapter Forty-Eight 
 
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Vizzini's Rule - Title
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From:[info]weeviltrends
Date: September 6th, 2008 01:25 am (UTC)
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I'm interested to see Ianto's reaction to what he sees in FH.
Great chap!
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 6th, 2008 01:34 am (UTC)
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You'll see that in Chapter 49 - hope it doesn't disappoint! Thanks!! :o)
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From:[info]bookwrm89
Date: September 6th, 2008 01:36 am (UTC)
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You are the strongest person I know. Someday, I’d really love to stop being the guy who has to keep finding out just how strong.

I love this line! I can really see Jack saying/feeling that way. I just hope he gives Ianto an inkling about his immortality and needing to find the Doctor before the whole opening the rift/Abbadon thing. Otherwise, he'll be the one testing Ianto's strength.
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 6th, 2008 01:41 am (UTC)
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Thanks! I was so hoping that line would work - it seemed a little convoluted, but I just loved the sentiment, it is SO Jack. *sigh* Love him! :)

Yeah, I'm not sure how much more Jack is going to spill before Abbadon...haven't gotten that far yet! *bites nails* *runs off to write*
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From:[info]tayla36
Date: September 6th, 2008 02:15 am (UTC)
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I do not know how I missed this fic before.
When I saw today's post, I went back and read from the beginning.
This is really on of the best fics I have read. I really like your
characterizations of both Jack and Ianto.
And this particular arc, fitting a Jack and Ianto story in while Gwen is off with Eugene, is just brilliant. And it is a wonderful explanation of how Ianto found out about Flatholm.

Eagerly awaiting more.
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 6th, 2008 02:36 am (UTC)
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Welcome!! Hope you enjoy your stay in my crazy little world. :D

Thank you so much!! *blushes* I'm glad you found us (me and the fic, that is) and VERY glad you're enjoying the story. I hope to have more up soon! :D
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From:[info]_miss_daisy_
Date: September 6th, 2008 02:38 am (UTC)
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I can't wait to see what Ianto's reactions to FH are. And I'm glad Jack talked to Ianto about this and didn't keep it all inside. I'm looking forward to more!
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 6th, 2008 02:59 am (UTC)
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I'm so glad!! I was afraid this was dragging on too much - maybe it's cuz I've been stuck with no computer and my handwritten notes for almost two weeks! :) I hope to be back to a chapter-a-day here really soon. :D
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From:[info]christine_twfan
Date: September 6th, 2008 02:41 am (UTC)
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Have I mentioned how happy I am that you are back? No?

*tackle hugs*

I'm anxious to see how Ianto reacts too. Awesome. :)
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 6th, 2008 03:01 am (UTC)
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Hee! *gets off floor after hug* Glad to be back too!! I need to get caught up on your journal - so much reading to do!

I'm so happy everyone is still in to my li'l fic, even with the break. *happy dance*
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From:[info]teachwriteslash
Date: September 6th, 2008 02:42 am (UTC)
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The reaction is so completely Ianto . . . and I love the way you show how Ianto knew about this and why.
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 6th, 2008 03:02 am (UTC)
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Thank you so so much!! :o)

Tomorrow I'm going to indulge in a long reading session as I lounge in bed with no where to go and catch up on your gorgeous fic. Can't wait!!
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Date: September 6th, 2008 03:31 am (UTC)
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I totally agree with bookwrm89 about loving the line where Jack wishes he didn't have to keep finding out just HOW strong Ianto is. Heartbreaking and beautiful. And spot-on characterizations once again. Well done, pal! This just keeps getting better and better in my opinion.

And... did you see that I finally got up the nerve to post a couple things? Check entries for 9/2 and 9/4. *winks*
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 6th, 2008 03:44 am (UTC)
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Yay! I plan to indulge in an orgy of reading tomorrow - will DEFINITELY check ya out. :D Can't wait!

Yay! I'm so glad ya'll aren't bored with me yet! I wrote this and most of the next part by hand when I was away the last 2 weeks so I re-re-re-read it and got kind of sick of it. :P Thanks ever so for the kind words. :)
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From:[info]psykaos42
Date: September 6th, 2008 04:30 am (UTC)
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Interesting take on how Ianto found out about Flat Holm. I'd assumed he had to have found out about it before Jack left with the Doctor the first time, because someone would have had to be available for the staff while he was gone. And it was obvious in 'Adrift' that he knew about it and had probably been there frequently.

The fact that Jack trusted him to keep it a secret, and that he did until he gave Gwen the GPS, shows he knows there can come a time when you have to let other people in on secrets. In Gwen's case, she had to actually see the place (and bring Jonah's mother there) to accept that, no matter how much it might seem like it, Jack can't magically fix everything.
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 7th, 2008 01:54 am (UTC)
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Thanks! I thought it seemed like a good time to pull this in - since Random Shoes was SO DULL!! :) I'm glad my take worked for you and I totally agree about Gwen. Some people just won't accept things, they have to see. I compared her to a terrier in one fic - she just can't let go! :)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!!
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From:[info]cjharknessgirl
Date: September 6th, 2008 04:48 am (UTC)
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“Ianto,” Jack said, pulling him into his arms. “You are the strongest person I know. Someday, I’d really love to stop being the guy who has to keep finding out just how strong. I meant what I said this morning. I only want you to be happy.”

Loved this part. Just lovely. I loved how Jack confided in Ianto because he needed help dealing with FH and he knew that Ianto wouldn't back down and let Jack go through it on his own. And brilliant chapter, I could see this happening on the show.
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 7th, 2008 01:55 am (UTC)
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THANK YOU!! That is my favorite comment! Squeee!! *GRIN*
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From:[info]cjharknessgirl
Date: September 7th, 2008 03:20 am (UTC)
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You're welcome! *smiles*

I always thought Adrift was good, (and not just the Hothouse scene, though hot damn!) but instead of being so Gwen focused on finding out about FH, I would've liked to see what you're writing. Jack explaining how he built the place and how he looks after the victims. And I just read the next chapter, these two chapters would have seriously made a fantastic episode. Jack was so sweet with that poor woman, and Ianto was right there beside lending support. Really good, I love seeing that side of Jack.

Have I said welcome back? *hugs* I always get excited when I see you've posted another chapter!
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 7th, 2008 03:45 am (UTC)
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*takes all your comments and cuddles them* You make me smile!!

*hugs* back to you! I'm so glad to be back, even though I had a TON of fun, it was exhausting!
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From:[info]cjharknessgirl
Date: September 7th, 2008 03:56 am (UTC)
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Aw, glad I make you smile! And it's the truth, I love this series!

I bet it was a lot of fun! :) Meeting JB and GDL was the highlight of my year! I know it can be very exhausting afterwards, I went on a trip not long ago and when I got back all I wanted to do was sleep and relax lol.
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 7th, 2008 04:04 am (UTC)
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Yes indeed - I need a vacation from my vacation!! :D *sigh* wish JB had come to Dragon*Con too, but then my head might have actually exploded! :D
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From:[info]cjharknessgirl
Date: September 7th, 2008 04:42 am (UTC)
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Lol, that's usually the case. You never get to actually rest much on a vacation! I'm pretty sure my head exploded, first I meet JB, he's sweet and funny. Next minute I'm standing in front of GDL and laughing with him. It was pretty surreal and as my friend was saying I was in my own little world at Comic Con. She kept teasing because we hadn't eaten all day and it was only after we left that I realized I was starving!
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From:[info]dragynville
Date: September 6th, 2008 07:05 am (UTC)
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Love this chapter, I'm falling all over it with love. :3 Beautiful way to bring them back into accord after their rough patches in the last two chapters.
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 7th, 2008 01:56 am (UTC)
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Yay! Fic loves to be fallen over. :D So glad you enjoyed! And, yeah, couldn't leave them fighting for too long. I love them too much! :D
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From:[info]hab318princess
Date: September 6th, 2008 08:08 am (UTC)
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Oh, that was lovely, especially the end, I just love their relationship!
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 7th, 2008 01:56 am (UTC)
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Thanks so much! Me too, they're just so much fun to play with. :D
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From:[info]alba17
Date: September 6th, 2008 01:28 pm (UTC)
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I still don't understand why, in the show, Jack had to keep it a secret. Didn't make a lot of sense. (And everything else in the show makes complete sense. LOL)
This line's a killer:
"Someday, I’d really love to stop being the guy who has to keep finding out just how strong."
Awwww.
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 7th, 2008 01:57 am (UTC)
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Yeah - hopefully my "reasoning" from Jack was okay. It still doesn't really make sense tho! LOL

Thanks so much! (and I adore your icon!)
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From:[info]alba17
Date: September 7th, 2008 02:33 pm (UTC)
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Thanks - laura guerin. looking forward to your DragonCon report.
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From:[info]thrace_adams
Date: September 6th, 2008 07:29 pm (UTC)
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Well you know I loved this chapter. Fav line: That's stupid. Oh Ianto, so blunt sometimes :) I love that he calls Jack on his crap, that he knows when Jack is lying and the ending...just too adorable :)

And thanks again for the shout out! Standing in line with you was definitely fun...as my hubs doesn't SQUEEE :)
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 7th, 2008 01:59 am (UTC)
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Heh - I love it when Ianto cuts thru the crap. :)

Hee! Probably a good thing Hubs doesn't squee over gorgeous Welshmen... ;)
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From:[info]thrace_adams
Date: September 7th, 2008 04:48 am (UTC)
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LOL yeah, wouldn't want him to *squee* over GDL, although he does like JB :) um but no *squeeeing* LOL
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 7th, 2008 04:52 am (UTC)
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HEE! I'm writing up my little D*C report to post tomorrow. OMG we did a lot in those few days!! :D And a lot of squeeeing! :D
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From:[info]butterflycell
Date: September 8th, 2008 05:06 pm (UTC)
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I'm so sorry this has taken me so long to get around to! (I think it's because I don't particularly like the whole Flat Holm thing... I dunno why, just wasn't a good episode for me)

But that was lovely =] Seeing Jack accept that Ianto wouldn't give up was wonderful!
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 10th, 2008 03:33 am (UTC)
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Oh thank you! Especially since it was from a not-enjoyable-episode for you. Don't kid yourself, Flat Holm is a VERY depressing storyline. I'm not surprised you didn't care for it.

So glad you liked this tho!! :D
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From:[info]doctor_addicted
Date: September 9th, 2008 09:57 am (UTC)
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You know what was most brilliant about this chapter? I had the exact same questions as Ianto! While reading I already thought about writing the comment and asking you why you decided to leave the staff of Flat Holm in the dark about their job and there's Ianto asking just this! And Jack's answer makes sense as well, I guess. There's something about being so terribly powerless that can destroy a person's belief in the good fight. Sometimes the truth is just not good enough (I was actually trying to indirectly quote 'The Dark Knight' here but I'm not sure I quite got it. Anyway, awesome movie that).
3 more chaps to go! :D
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From:[info]buttononthetop
Date: September 10th, 2008 03:31 am (UTC)
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*nods again* Yeah, I had to struggle with Jack's reasoning because when you get right down to it, I agreed with Ianto in "Adrift" - just TELL THEM. So to hear that Jack's answer makes ANY sort of sense makes me happy.

So glad you're enjoying!!
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From:[info]evester
Date: May 6th, 2009 08:49 pm (UTC)
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Love love love!

Minor Note:
maybe I told you because I knew wouldn’t give up on it.
I think you meant: maybe I told you because I knew you wouldn’t give up on it.